Tuesday, October 25, 2011

practice diction analysis

In the exert The Mezzanine, by Nichason Baker, the author uses high language to describe the lobby of his office building along with his over the top apperance. His use of connotation suggests a picturesque vision of his apperance while walking through the lobby. "Turned toward the escalators, carrying a black Penguin paperback and a small white CVS bag, its receipt stapled over the top," describes the harsh clattering of the setting.

I'm not really sure how to end this or how long it is suppose to be so I'm just gonna end it now haha\

-howdini